Sunday, April 17, 2011

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Three people dragged the bloody man towards their friends, their hands wet with the wounded's blood and sweat. The limping man was heavy, but the three people continued despite the pungent smell coming from the wounded creeping up their noses. They did not give up, slowly moving, so as to help the man to survive in this time of war, when almost everywhere was not safe. As the man's body scraped against the ground, a gravelly sound was made, which alerted the three people to raise his body higher. Another two men watched from a distance, the farther one starting to walk towards the three people to help them.

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